my friend Amalia and i were talking the other day, and she said, 'we are the black pit alumni' i replied, 'there is a poem there!' we each wrote a version. this is mine, hers can be seen at her blog, Amalia on purpose, which is linked in my 'blogs i follow' sidebar.
we are the black pit alumni
we, who have laid long
in the depths of despair
we are the black pit alumni
our members, world wide
and diverse
we are the black pit alumni,
standing arm and arm,
we've weathered the fire storm
we've crawled up from the depths
of that dark pit
that dark pit,
where we cried out in anguish,
felt the sting and bite of
the cold winds of separation
that dark pit,
into which we fell unwittingly
tumbled down, we lay broken,
and felt our aloneness
on that park bench in darkness where we wept,
in that bottle of liquid amnesia where we tried to forget,
from our rooms of seclusion where dark fears were met
that fire of separation, how it burned!
this, our initiation, our price of
admission
we cried out from our black pits
and heard that gentle Voice,
felt the tender ministrations
of our hearts
His succoring grace and mercy
sheltered and enfolded us with such
close attention and compassion
we were moved to look up, to gaze out
and found the hands
of earthly angels stretched out to us,
those servants of Glory,
those alumni from the black pit,
dressed in robes of humility and service,
such finely stitched garments,
each a different hue and shade
yet all of a cloth, the same
we invite you today.
take this hand outstretched,
take this robe custom made,
and join us
--bruised orange
Darling, I cling to your hand tonight. Thanks for this. Hey, if we're alumni, is the robe a graduation one? And can we toss our caps into the air yet?
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